Salmon Rushdie, may I be bold enough to make a purely creative observation, as after all W.T.F. do I know?.
For me, your 1st creation is just about bob on't brass!, however on the following proviso's.
1stly, the body needs a simple switch round, dubbed body immediately behind the head, flat tinsel body to the rear of the tube.
Secondly the wing, I'd like the shorter wing on 1st and the longer wing on top to give a more classic tear drop shape.
Tied like that, I think you'll be beating Salar off with a stick and charging £5 a pop on line!.
Just so they don't feel left out, there's sod all wrong with your other tyings either for that matter, same row 3rd one in 'aint that shabby either.
Final tip!, don't leave your bag laying on the bank, you'll be tying more of these flee's if I find your bag!,lol.
El Coolio!, Pedro.